May 21, 2006

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                   Switch on light exchange from sun
                       here is a crossing of day and night..

                       realize of longer noon day by day ,
                       few joy and few hasty for pass the time..

                      passing by today's memory and , 
                      mind welcome to gentry twilight time..

                       pastel color clouds floating in the sky and 
                      switch on light of several star and the moon , 
                      It'll wrap up us with bosom in heavenly show..     


                                                        .............by/NaomiWoman




Comments (18)

  • The grandeur of the paintings that are created on the canvass above our head.

  • That is wonderful.
    ...wrap us with bosom in heavenly show...
    Very comforting lines.
    Thank you.

  • Your poem is awesome.  You have a wonderful talent.

  • Stangely stirring to me those words.   Inspiring as well.   Thanks.

  • Your Poetry bespeaks such a gentle and wise spirit~

    It is ever and always a treasure~

    Many Blessings~

  • That is so lovely. Angela

  • Yep, I liked the poem. Have a wonderful day!

  • Oh, how lovely...the words are beautiful...'pastel color clouds floating in the sky ' and wraps us ...'...just wonderful, Naomi* and love the picture...went to my brother's..came home a while ago..saw your comment,..thank you..always so nice to see you* hope your weather stays just beautiful for you...have a great day...hugs..love, Lee xo

  • ....would be nice to walk along that bridge and chat...

  • There is something about the dawn and dusk that can inpire both peace...and big thoughts. I love your poem.

  • That "mind welcome to gentry twilight time" is gonna stick in me head for awhile...not quite sure WHAT it means.

  • Beautiful.

  • I was thinking what a wonderful day I had yesterday and the title about lonely people is there because I encountered some lonely people yesterday.

  • You're poem is wonderful. I really enjoy the last line.

  • ryc: "perhaps I'll never entirely understand myself"

    I'm right there with you :)

  • Thanks for stopping by at my site! Have a good day!

    Anna

  • Very nicely said and it created a wonderful visual vista. Thank you for the sharing.

  • The travel bag looks homemade too.....it really is carpet that someone sewed into a bag.... hope you are having a nice weekend.

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